| ▲ | azinman2 4 hours ago | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
This was actually really helpful. I feel like it should be done for all PR speak. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
| ▲ | JumpCrisscross 4 hours ago | parent [-] | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
It's better than the original, but still off. "The Microsoft and OpenAI situation just got messy" is objectively wrong–it has been messy for months [1]. Nos. 1 through 3 are fine, though "if they can't keep up with the tech, OpenAI is moving out" parrots OpenAI's party line. No. 4 doesn't make sense–it starts out with "we" referring to OpenAI in the first person but ends by referring to them in the third person "they." No. 5 is reductive when phrased with "just." It would seem the translator took corporate PR speak and translated it into something between the LinkedIn and short-form blogger dialects. [1] https://www.wsj.com/tech/ai/openai-and-microsoft-tensions-ar... | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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