If the core of the post is yours I think it is fine, but there are so many pieces which the LLM always uses in these things that they stand out more than emdashes.

Some examples.

> I've felt the grief too—but mine resolved differently than I expected, and I think that says something about what kind of developer I've been all along.

> I kept having this nagging sense that we were mourning different things.

> Here's what I notice about my grief: none of it is about missing the act of writing code. It's about the world around the code changing.

> If you're mourning the context—the changing web, the shifting career landscape, the uncertainty—that's real too, but it's more actionable.

It uses these kinds of patterns over and over that it becomes obvious Just go on LinkedIn.

"It's not X, its Y"

It's increasingly clear that the LLMs leave more of a mark than authors realize when they run their writing through for a touching-up. This has been coming up a lot lately: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=47346449.

That's why readers end up reacting to the LLM imprints rather than the content.

I don't mean to be critical because it's a good article! But I bet if you shared the version before it was "tightened up", most of us would prefer it.

(I suppose I'd better add that this isn't a criticism of LLMs either - it's about figuring out how to use them well: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=47342045)

It's the split. Many of us are mourning, you are not.

Maybe the stages of grief are not aligned yet. Or maybe it's as your post says there are two types of people.

It's too bad it has so much grating LLM-voice. I don't think you typed all the LLM-isms, and they make it hard to know how much to trust that the rest is what you intended to convey.

It's classified.

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