I wasn't put off by it. I read the article, got all the information I needed, it was interesting and informative. (In fact, I find the human-written ones more often annoying; most people are not good at writing, and are apt to create huge walls of text, whereas the AI is biased towards making the information easy to consume)

I do agree it is one of those “if I had more time, I would write a shorter letter” situations.

But in this case the piece is wordier than a bad human writer would be. If they want to use ai for writing, so be it, but at least include “concisely” in the prompt.