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IncreasePosts 4 hours ago

A sloppy mixed metaphor?

card_zero 3 hours ago | parent | next [-]

I'm learning to like 'em more, along with every other human idiosyncracy. Besides, it makes a kind of sense, the idea of some resonance occuring in one's gusset. Timber timbre. Flangent thrumming.

IncreasePosts 3 hours ago | parent [-]

Tuning fork in loins just makes me think of that chess cheating scandal with a vibrating butt plug.

ses1984 3 hours ago | parent [-]

It just makes me think of that time I saw someone recovering from eye surgery and I had a visceral reaction.

tasty_freeze 2 hours ago | parent | prev | next [-]

I thought it was more creative than sloppy. Don't forget that many ordinary phrases were once jarring mixed imagery. To "wear your heart on your sleeve" was coined by Shakespeare; we still use it because it "stuck" due to its unorthodox phrasing.

If you like your prose to be anodyne, then maybe you like what AI produces.

co_king_5 3 hours ago | parent | prev [-]

I thought it was quite an effective metaphor!