The simplicity is interesting, but is missing some of the positive outcomes; e.g. meaningful democratic governance (or control) of the AI/ASI('s). (shamelessly working on that at ai-democracy.org !)

Several different branches could go to versions of that depending on what challenges we're able to overcome.

Whats the incentive for these outcomes? Given a neoliberal society that we have, what will allow this to take place?