It's definitely a slight improvement, but it is still rather obvious that the output is AI-written :(

The tell tell sign for me is that it's still incredibly hard to read. AI tend to write in a style that I'm unable to easily read (humans does that as well sometimes). I constantly have to go back and re-read the previous sentence, because the text simply doesn't register.

A next step I'd suggest is asking the LLM to use shorter words when available.

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throwaway219450 an hour ago | parent | next [-]

I found the coffee shop one telling. Both suffer from being a stream of bland statements. The original version is actually reasonable if you just excise the Claude-isms. The rewrite has a whiff of ASD-STE100, and reads like the sort of sentences one would write for homework while learning a new language. There is also almost no difference between the de-slopped opinion piece and the blog post.

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BoredomIsFun 6 hours ago | parent | prev | next [-]

Did you check this? https://huggingface.co/sam-paech/gemma-3-27b-it-antislop

	▲	mrweasel 4 hours ago \| parent [-]
		No, I have no wish to use LLMs to generate text for me. I would however be happy if those who do, would use models that generate more readable text.

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j45 5 hours ago | parent | prev | next [-]

LLMs as a word generator love generating words, and that includes generating bigger words when simpler ones will do.

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mochizou 5 hours ago | parent | prev [-]

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