That's the standard annoying pattern though: "Rewrites are declared by the publisher, never inferred from overlap." and "NULL means dirty, and DELETE is the fence." - still the same LLMisms. I didn't expect them to disappear, but it's not a radical improvement either.

This one is pretty terrible (right after “The worst outcome is a spurious rerun, never lost work.”). We’ve got lands, several "no X", hyphenation, strange noun/verb sentence order and an unnecessary analogy word (swallowed).

> There's no read-modify-write and no truncation of the dirty period, so a write that lands during a job can't be swallowed.