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cwal37 a day ago

I wonder if anyone read the copy on this page or if it mostly came out of an LLM.

The "Restoring the shoreline" and Rebuilding the marshlands" paragraphs below the images are almost exactly the same. The first sentence is exactly the same.

beerandt a day ago | parent | next [-]

Maybe, but there's some very specific legal language that cpra and the state requires everyone use in referring to some of these issues, and at least part of the land SpaceX is acquiring is involved in coastal restoration lawsuits or deep water horizon settlements or both.

As an engineer working on cpra projects in the past, I've wanted to reword a variety things but was forced to use their legal language.

It's mostly a good thing as it keeps things properly defined in a political context that are meant to have specific technical meanings (like marsh, beach, rebuild vs restore).

cwal37 a day ago | parent [-]

I did briefly consider something along those lines, but shoreline and marshlands are materially different, plus they've already changed the text.

schiffern a day ago | parent | prev | next [-]

For me that makes it more likely to be human-generated. Seems like a "rushing person juggling revs and copy-pasting" mistake.

FWIW, the writing style and tone match pre-LLM SpaceX writing. Of course you can prompt an LLM to mimic style, but somehow the regression-to-average blandness shines through. That can be hard to distinguish from bog standard corporate speak though.

bobchadwick a day ago | parent | prev [-]

Maybe the site developer saw your comment. They're different now.

ceroxylon a day ago | parent | next [-]

Good thing the internet never forgets: https://web.archive.org/web/20260825163906/https://www.space...

baggachipz a day ago | parent | prev [-]

Mecha-hitler is reading the comments here and responding accordingly