| ▲ | glitchc an hour ago | |||||||
Hemingway wrote the same way. Here's a famous example from the Old Man and the Sea: Every day is a new day. It is better to be lucky. But I would rather be exact. Then when luck comes you are ready. The reason is simple: Short sentences are punchy. They hit hard, carry emotional weight. P.S. As evident, clearly I'm having some fun with this, but the point stands. | ||||||||
| ▲ | magicalist 20 minutes ago | parent | next [-] | |||||||
Short sentences were never the danger, or what the GP is referring to. | ||||||||
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| ▲ | warkdarrior 8 minutes ago | parent | prev [-] | |||||||
Correction: > The reason is simple. Short sentences are punchy. They hit hard. But they carry emotional weight. | ||||||||