| ▲ | ryukoposting 2 hours ago | |||||||
Yeah. They also use em dashes to repeat a word with emphasis, something that is done much better with parentheses and italics. > And also occasionally — occasionally — one just needs a random dramatic pause. > And also occasionally (occasionally) one just needs a random dramatic pause. I know which one I'd rather read. Though, frankly, I'd prefer neither and I'm trying to remove this kind of thing from my own writing. | ||||||||
| ▲ | lesostep an hour ago | parent [-] | |||||||
I can't be the only one that reads those two examples very differently. In a first example, the second "occasionally" is stressed, when in second example it feels almost whispered. | ||||||||
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