i feel like the author of this newsletter is doing themselves a disservice by having the "money pls" be a wall of text that occupies the entirety of a phone screen.

people always talk about how they just close any site that doesn't display the article immediately or has popups that interrupt you mid-reading.

i'm not saying they can't ask at all but maybe shorten it a little and have it link to something a little more verbose?

i suggest this because people are very scroll happy; they don't scroll slowly unless they're already invested or see something that immediately piques their interest.

a wall of irrelevant text will just make people fly through the article itself, go "oh wow it keeps going" and then just give up and hit the back button.

For those who might be confused by the solicitations in the intro - keep scrolling, the article is very well written, we would all gain if more people read it.