I appreciate the amount of detail in the post, I think it's a useful addition to the space.

That said, I have to read LLM output all day all the time, and I would implore you to take the time to explore your own voice a bit more.

> Two separate things then happened, and it is worth keeping them apart.

Is one of those phrases claude spits out nonstop.

Nonstop. There is too much wholesale reliance on LLMs to generate content. When I use LLMs for scientific writing, I approach it differently: I write the paragraph dirty, then ask an LLM to perform a minor rewrite for "clarity", using Claude's now retired Concise Mode. This has been a great approach for scientific writing. It tends to prevent these overly used turns of phrase, it makes sure that the writing is making the points I want to make, and shortens writing time by cleaning up the dirty edges of my grammar (especially since my writing can tend towards convoluted constructions). More artistic/creative writing, I'd probably not use it at all, because then, it's usually (for me) about rthym and emotional flow.

BTW It IS an effective rhetorical phrase, but given it's ubiquity in Claude's output, I have to avoid it.

Ahhh yeah, I’m not going to sit here and say I don’t use Claude to clean up my writing (ie make it actually coherently laid out). In all honestly I tend to write in a rambling stream of consciousness style across random scrap markdown files (ha), but point is taken.

I second this, I read too much AI slop already so when something triggers that part of my brain, at this stage I immediatley lose the capacity to engage outside of work, largly because it feels like work. Scrolling through, this article looks like it holds useful info. Info i'd likely love to engage with, but realistically I cannot force myself to spend my weekend reading more ai outout, even if human seeded.

I caught the title "The real work..." labelizing things in a sort of weird phrasing like this is the one I've seen a lot.

I was triggered by the "Honest Numbers" section

Thats honestly a load bearing phrase, it truely wires clean sentences together, would be a footgun with an unknown blast radius if you didn't use it.