| ▲ | docheinestages 2 hours ago | |
Some suggestions: The landing page has an information overload (at least for me). I have a hard time understanding what to look at, because it's both a landing page with very dense writings, and at the same time something that looks like a real app. Less is more. Look at some of the best landing pages out there. They tell the core story with a few words. A video where you walk through your product is even better. | ||
| ▲ | JulianQuinn an hour ago | parent [-] | |
Thats fair! Its trying to be a landing page and the actual app at the same time, so you cant really tell where to look. Because of yout feedback just pushed a change, cut most of the wall of text and moved the live demo up so its right under the headline instead of buried at the bottom. A short walkthrough clip is next on the list. Thanks for taking the time to write it out, genuinly useful! | ||