I don’t disagree with your conclusion that this is likely ai rewritten, but I do find it strange that you say “normal people don’t write like this” when it is mimicking how people write, and using patterns I have seen people write. I think models are at the point where style is not really reliable as an indicator anymore.

I'm sure there's plenty of writing in the above style to be found on the Internet, and hence having been trained on by the LLM. I'm also not a fan of this style, and in particular I'd say it's rarely or never found in scientific / technical writing meant to convey understanding rather than sell or hype. So here it's IMO more of a style mismatch.

people sure do write like that, in novels. nobody writes scientific articles like novels, because scientific articles don't need to maximally capture audience attention. the purpose of a scientific article is to convey information - this pursuit is not assisted by punchy prose.