This is a neat post and I'm glad it got written and this is a little bit off-topic but:

Hey, 'logicprog, your writing is fine!

Use LLMs to critique your writing, check its structure, vet your choice of topic sentences, check flow from graf to graf and section to section, look for passive voice and overused words. LLMs are fantastic for that. But don't use a single word an LLM suggests in your actual writing. If it suggests something really fucking good, too bad, those words are disqualified. It's an easy red line to adhere to, easier than it sounds, and it'll keep your writing human.

(You ended up somewhere around here anyways, but that was after you posted something with LLM-written language because you weren't confident enough in your own writing. The things you do "worse" than an LLM are what make you you; be protective of them!)

Thank you!