| ▲ | vessenes 2 hours ago |
| Man, I hated last year’s clanker-tone, and I hate this one’s too by now. I don’t want to read the word load-bearing ever again. The reminder that there’s structure and content and they’re different is a good one. Even a small legal document has this microstructure of references, inside, outside explicitly and outside by inference. |
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| ▲ | ekns an hour ago | parent [-] |
| I get it, it's not ideal. Yet there is no one else doing this work so I put effort where I think it's most neglected - which isn't fully refined prose, imo. |
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| ▲ | vessenes 15 minutes ago | parent | next [-] | | I appreciate the work! And I hear you; writing is a lot of work, especially if you don’t need the benefits of synthesis it gives the writer. I’ve cadged some rules somewhere for de-LLMing the text; if I can find them I’ll post a follow up link. They don’t help with structure though - and I think this is arguably the most important bit - taking the reader through a logical progression. I didn’t read carefully enough to opine on your structure, but again, thanks for doing this! | |
| ▲ | mishellaneous 12 minutes ago | parent | prev [-] | | some people would, in this case, prefer the unrefined version |
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