The article looks like an AI generated novel to me. So I didn't bother reading it in detail. But I see telltale signs of long conversations leading to the agent cutting corners.

To the author (and those who write novel-like blogs): I suggest publishing the raw prompt you used to generate such slop instead. We'll have more respect for you if you respect the reader's time.

It probably still took way more time to write than it did to read.

It's also kind-of their point that they find the information delivery more important than the prose; they're leaning into their situation :-D