Thank you so much for this thorough analysis. Really appreciate it. I'm pretty convinced now that my experiment just proved my theory that I could somehow improve on the language - wrong.

Mostly, like I said in other comments, losing all of the grammar encoded in words is just not worth it just to make it somewhat easier to read (to someone who doesn't already know Greek).

I guess I had to see it for myself to understand it, so I feel like it was still a worthwhile little experiment.