fresh spring grass erupting fast

the distant engine purr comes

ouch goes the lawnmower

Beautiful. How did you come up with that? It's strangely captivating.

	▲	ZeWaka 3 days ago \| parent [-]
		Just a normal haiku pattern and waiting for tests to finish, 5-7-5. Could be 'wrong' since erupting is "technically" 3 syllables - but I think it sounds better said fast. Becomes a 7-7-5 that way. Same issue with 'lawnmower.'