>> Glaze works by understanding the AI models that are training on human art, and using machine learning algorithms, computing a set of minimal changes to artworks, such that it appears unchanged to human eyes, but appears to AI models like a dramatically different art style.

That's supposed be the single most important sentence for the entire article, but ended being a mouthful which hardly makes sense.

>> So when someone then prompts the model to generate art mimicking the charcoal artist, they will get something quite different from what they expected.

"when" and "then" don't work like that.

I' still trying to see a crisp solution statement beyond "is a system designed to protect human artists by disrupting style mimicry.".