>"But Joy had followed me back because she was curious, you know, and she was standing in the hallway. We turned around, and Joy says: 'Needs work,' and turned out and walked away."

This part reminded me of the Black Triangle (2004):

https://archive.ph/qqOnP

https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=698753

Alternative archive link: https://web.archive.org/web/20130927070227/http://rampantgam...

I really like this, thank you.