> I may eventually get to the wall label part but this is tough.

Good luck. After the first few paragraphs I thought of a great quote that I heard somewhere: "Twitter ruined my reading skills, but it vastly improved my writing skills."

If you're trying to actually get a point across (vs. writing something that is just read for pleasure) GET TO THE DAMN POINT.

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bcraven 2 days ago | parent [-]

I suspect the presentation felt different to the audience who were receiving it at the talk, rather than us reading it at our own pace.

	▲	jrowen 2 days ago \| parent [-]
		The author does note that the article "is, with the benefit of hindsight, the more polished version of what I was trying to say." But it does feel plucked out of a context/world/tradition that is not as common around these parts.