I don’t find it long winded. It just gives background and makes a bunch of valid points.

Mainly that creatives are being screwed because every time they get given extra rights they’re bullied into selling them for nothing.

So this right that they get the copyright back after 35y is different - because you can’t be forced to sell it for nothing.

We need more laws like this to help creative people make the money they deserve. Most creative people make a pitiful amount of money while studios / publishers / labels do better and better. It’s not sustainable.