| ▲ | johnfn 13 hours ago | |||||||
To be explicit, it’s not general hallmarks of good writing. It’s exactly two common constructions: not X but Y, and 3 items in parallel. These two pop up in extreme disproportion to normal “good writing”. Good writers know to save these tricks for when they really want to make a point. | ||||||||
| ▲ | anon7000 9 hours ago | parent | next [-] | |||||||
Most people aren’t great writers, though (including myself). I’d guess that if people find the “not X but Y” compelling, they’ll overuse it. Overusing some stylistic element is such a normal writing “mistake”. Unless they’re an extremely good writer with lots of tools in their toolbox. But that’s not most people. | ||||||||
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| ▲ | finder83 13 hours ago | parent | prev [-] | |||||||
Interesting, I'll have to look for those. | ||||||||