FWIW: Your initial proposition, "Your days are slipping away." is a negative framing. Maybe this is a good way of appealing to people's fears, but I thought it was depressing and was not eager to read more.

An alternative could be something like "Make the most of your days".

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watwut 9 hours ago | parent | next [-]

I think that I have heard or read "Make the most of your days" in various ads and inspirational motivators too many times. It is something that makes me ignore whoever is saying it, because it was overused by everyone else.

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maghfoor 10 hours ago | parent | prev | next [-]

Dude, that is so true. I think I agree with you and your reframing. Going to change it to that

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maghfoor 10 hours ago | parent | next [-]

And just like that, changed it in under 1min. Beauty of web dev.

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bdangubic 9 hours ago | parent [-]

you should reconsider, make the most if your days sounds like new years resolution that will end by the time you run of of ham

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iammjm 9 hours ago | parent [-]

I think your comment is more a statement about you and your past experiences, because I vibe with "make the most of your days" in a positive way

	▲	Dilettante_ 7 hours ago \| parent [-]
		Sounds like soulless generic ad copy that you see everywhere to me(respectfully, that's just how I read it).

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integralid 6 hours ago | parent | prev [-]

I actually think about my life slipping away almost daily, but the reframing works too.

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chickenzzzzu 9 hours ago | parent | prev [-]

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HighGoldstein 9 hours ago | parent [-]

It's a dark pattern. Would you also call it "sensitive" to want to be able to cancel a subscription without going through 3 pages, filling out a form, and convincing a call center worker?

	▲	chickenzzzzu 8 hours ago \| parent [-]
		i am a bit confused as to how a one click subscription cancelation is related to... what i am assuming you are desiring is... "non coercive marketing copy"?