https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lD7rSxPncs4

I listened to it when you posted before. Better than most of the others I have listened wich were all much more "cold".

The visual stuff also helps to make it more powerfull and cohesive.

The bad part is that it wanders a lot to get nowhere and it does not create a climax that bridges with the second part. The same sounds and ambient with a producer behind that creates an arragment for it would be much more powerful.