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j-bos 6 hours ago

I usually ask these models to tell me a short story, and most times the prose is stiff and the story reads like a mass market straight to KDP kids book. But wow, first shot generated something, light, mildly funny, and chill. Quite a surprise.

Pasted here for your own judgement:

*Title: The Last Lightbulb*

The power had been out for three days. Rain drummed against the windows of the old cabin, and the only light came from a flickering candle on the kitchen table.

Maggie, wrapped in a wool blanket, squinted at the last working flashlight. “We’ve got one bulb left, Jack. One.

Jack, hunched over a board game he’d dug out of the closet, didn’t look up. “Then don’t turn it on unless you’re reading Shakespeare or delivering a baby.”

She rolled her eyes. “I need it to find the can opener. I’m not eating cold beans with my fingers again.”

Jack finally glanced up, grinning. “You did that yesterday and called it ‘rustic dining.’”

“Desperate times,” she muttered, clicking the flashlight on. The beam cut through the gloom—and immediately began to dim.

“No—!” Jack lunged, but too late. The light sputtered… then died.

Silence. Then Maggie sighed. “Well. There goes civilization.”

Jack leaned back, chuckling. “Guess we’re officially cavemen now.”

“Cavewoman,” she corrected, fumbling in the dark. “And I’m going to bed. Wake me when the grid remembers we exist.”

As she shuffled off, Jack called after her, “Hey—if you find the can opener in the dark, you’re officially magic.”

A pause. Then, from down the hall: “I found socks that match. That’s basically witchcraft.”

Jack smiled into the dark. “Goodnight, witch.”

“Goodnight, caveman.”

Outside, the rain kept falling. Inside, the dark didn’t feel so heavy anymore.

The End