I had a hard time making it through the Summary section of the resume. I assume the bold was there to help people skimming, but some of it seemed almost random. The first line has “roll out new features quickly” in bold, which is pretty generic and makes me question the value of the bold text. The “y” in “quickly” also missed getting the bold treatment. So from the first bullet I’m questioning judgement and attention to detail.

Should bullet 3 say, “based of chart museum” or “based off chart museum”? “Of” seems like the wrong word there.

Halfway through the summary I was ready to stop reading.

I would tighten that section up a lot, and distill it down more. Make it easier to read with less jargon. Make sure there are no typos. It should be easy to skim because it’s well-written, not because words are in bold.

Thank you for this!!

I will go through it very very carefully!