Isn't that though the narrative arc being shaped? We see it everywhere now, but just because LLMs like to output it doesn't make the structure you're highlighting bad.

Overall I found it a decent piece, a few too many "<term>: <explanation>" blocks for my taste but better than what I can write - and than most of the tech-industry blogging I come across.

Not sure why you need an "ain't just water, its a two element molecule!" type rubbish to tell a story.