▲ | kaechle 6 days ago | ||||||||||||||||
I’ll see your pedantry and raise you ... more pedantry. The sentence may be a bit clunky, but there’s nothing grammatically wrong with it. And you’re leaving out the first sentence, which frames the comparison: > ASML gross revenue was 28B€ in 2024, and their net income was 7.5B€. While 1.3B€ (the amount ASML invested in this 1.7B€ fund raise) is not pocket change, it is also an amount that ASML can not afford to lose. Worded another way: > ASML had a healthy margin of 7.5B€ on 28B€ in gross revenue in 2024. 1.3B€ isn’t a huge chunk of this, relatively speaking, but *it’s also an amount that ASML can’t afford to lose.* Still clunky. Still not wrong. | |||||||||||||||||
▲ | kgwgk 6 days ago | parent | next [-] | ||||||||||||||||
> there’s nothing grammatically wrong with it. There was nothing in the comment that you reply to suggesting that it was grammatically wrong: "The sentence is framed like a contrast but then instead it says the same thing twice." If anything it suggests it's semantically wrong. | |||||||||||||||||
▲ | ath92 6 days ago | parent | prev | next [-] | ||||||||||||||||
You replaced “1.3B is not pocket change” with “1.3B€ isn’t a huge chunk of this”. Those have opposite meanings. | |||||||||||||||||
▲ | paulddraper 6 days ago | parent | prev [-] | ||||||||||||||||
Either incorrectly worded, or very poorly worded. It's a open question as to which one. | |||||||||||||||||
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