Yeah that plan was painful to read. It felt like each sentence didn't have much of anything to say to start and was stretched out artificially.

Even as a heavy em-dash user*, it felt so heavy on the (spaceless**) ems that it tripped my own LLM vibe-dar.

* https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=45074070

** I prefer to do — with space, not—without space