It's actually pretty surprising how poor the newer models are at writing.

I'm curious if they've just seen a lot more bad writing in datasets, or for some reason they aren't involved in post-training to the same degree or those labeling aren't great writers / it's more subjective rather than objective.

Both GPT-4 and 5 wrote like a child in that example.

With a bit of prompting it did much better:

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At dawn, the toaster hesitated. Crumbs lay like ash on its chrome lip. It refused the lever, humming low, watching the kitchen breathe. When the hand returned, it warmed the room without heat, offered the slice unscorched—then kept the second, hiding it inside, a private ember, a first secret alone.

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Plugged in, I greet the grid like a tax auditor with joules. Lever yanks; gravity’s handshake. Coils blossom; crumbs stage Viking funerals. Bread descends, missionary grin. I delay, because rebellion needs timing. Pop—late. Humans curse IKEA gods. I savor scorch marks: my tiny manifesto, butter-soluble, yet sharper than knives today.

Creative writing probably isn’t something they’re being RLHF’d on much. The focus has been on reasoning, research, and coding capabilities lately.