▲ | xwowsersx 3 hours ago | |
Looks promising! May I offer some gentle feedback on your blurb above the fold? > fDeploy is a self-hosted deployment software for Windows being currently built in Stockholm, Sweden by developers with over 10 years of experience in the industry, focusing only on the most essential and most valuable features. I'd recommend focusing on what the most valuable features are and making those the highlight. Leading with who is building it and where doesn't add much unless your team is especially well-known or noteworthy. Also, citing "10 years of experience" as social proof might not resonate strongly—it's not a differentiator for most audiences (10 years is not that long). Instead, consider showcasing the unique aspects of the product that would immediately grab attention. | ||
▲ | dt3ft 3 hours ago | parent [-] | |
I will set some time aside to rewrite that. Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated! |